Kia ora Phoenix. Great to see you blogging in the holidays. I'm glad you're spending some quality time with your whānau and getting lots of exercise. I like the different colours you've used but the yellow words are quite hard to read. If you're looking for more activities to do in the holidays you can check out our holiday blogging page.
Kia ora Phoenix, your holiday sounds very similar to mine actually, (with extra bike rides). What was your favourite movie you watched in the holidays?
Kia ora Phoenix it's Byesion and I really like your blog post about the holidays. I really love it! Something you could do to improve this divine piece of work is lighten up the first slide to make it stand out more. Apart from that it is amazing! Bye!
Hi Phoenix. My name is Lisiate, and I pretty like your story, it would look a bit better if it was on a google drawing, or... a google document. This still is cool I kinda like it alot. Ka kite ano! keep up the great work!
Kia ora Phoenix. Great to see you blogging in the holidays. I'm glad you're spending some quality time with your whānau and getting lots of exercise. I like the different colours you've used but the yellow words are quite hard to read. If you're looking for more activities to do in the holidays you can check out our holiday blogging page.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Phoenix, your holiday sounds very similar to mine actually, (with extra bike rides). What was your favourite movie you watched in the holidays?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Phoenix it's Byesion and I really like your blog post about the holidays. I really love it! Something you could do to improve this divine piece of work is lighten up the first slide to make it stand out more. Apart from that it is amazing! Bye!
ReplyDeleteHi Phoenix,my name is vili from sanit puis x in glen innes. your holiday sounds very similar to mine actually, keep up the good work
ReplyDeleteHi Phoenix,
ReplyDeleteXavier here. It sounds like you had a very fun holiday with your family! Keep up the great work!
Hi Phoenix.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Lisiate, and I pretty like your story, it would look a bit better if it was on a google drawing, or... a google document. This still is cool I kinda like it alot. Ka kite ano! keep up the great work!
Kia Ora Phoenix,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Krystal, and I attend St Pius X School. It sounds like you had a fun holiday. Keep up the good work!
Kia Ora, Phoenix,
ReplyDeletemy name is taniel and i attend St Pius X School. you holidays sounds and proba bly looks good and fun, ka kite ano.
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