Kia Ora Phoenix I really like the adjectives you used in your descriptive writing... violently erupting and furiously streaming down the side ... Great work!
Kia Ora Phoenix. Thank you for sharing your writing. Well done of trying to use new words to make your writing more interesting. I particularly like the words violently erupting and furiously streaming down. These helped to create an image in my mind as I read your writing. What do you think it would be like to see a real life eruption?
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ReplyDeleteI really like the adjectives you used in your descriptive writing... violently erupting and furiously streaming down the side ... Great work!
Kia Ora Phoenix. Thank you for sharing your writing. Well done of trying to use new words to make your writing more interesting. I particularly like the words violently erupting and furiously streaming down. These helped to create an image in my mind as I read your writing. What do you think it would be like to see a real life eruption?
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